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nellie
03-28-2002, 05:24 AM
Sad Water

Saddness washes over me
Like the morning shower's water
It surrounds me
Like a wall of water
Closing in on me
It envelopes me
Seeps into my skin
It feels like it's raining inside my body
The water like salty tears
Running through my veins
With the force of a tidal wave

Christy
03-28-2002, 09:01 AM
I LOVE reading other people's poetry or song lyircs! I love your poem! It's great! ;-)

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nellie
03-28-2002, 10:45 AM
thank you, i write whenever i'm upset or i feel inspired.

i am the inner child..... quiet, sensitive, and shy

Supervixen
03-30-2002, 05:04 PM
you can try to win $$ for your poetry on poetry.com
or at the very least get your work published. They
published a few of my works and one prose.







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