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nellie

04-02-2002, 11:51 AM

What I Am Not
I am not...
Very pretty
I don't have the body of a modle...
For I am too short and fat
I don't have a lovley face
I am average at best...
I am not beautiful
There is no one feature of myself that I like
No one would want to paint me...
No one would want my picture...
I am not dilusional about how I look
This is what I see
And it's not pretty...

ROMEO

04-02-2002, 11:58 AM

whoa,what a downer nellie,I can't belive it's a self expression,if it is your wrong. Looks only get you so far in life,it's what's inside that really matters.

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Lulu

04-02-2002, 12:02 PM

gosh, that is a sad poem. now i feel bad. but you have a real talent nellie. but do you really feel that way?

This message was edited by Lulu on 4-2-02 @ 4:05 PM

nellie

04-02-2002, 12:10 PM

yes, i do feel that way about myself, despie the fact my bestest friend says that i'm a "pretty lady" and lea says that i'm "beautiful", i think that i'm an ugly duckling.

i am the inner child..... quiet, sensitive, and shy

Poison Ivy

04-02-2002, 12:15 PM

that reminded me of this....

Am I not pretty enough
Is my heart too broken
Do I cry too much
Am I too outspoken
Don't I make you laugh
Should I try it harder
Why do you see right through me
I live
I breathe
I let it rain on me
I sleep
I wake
I try hard not to break
I crave
I love
I've waited long enough
I try as hard as I can
I laugh
I feel
I make believe it's real
I fall
I freeze
I pray down on my knees
I hope
I stand
I take it like a man
I try as hard as I can

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nellie

04-02-2002, 12:26 PM

wow! that's a really amazing poem. it more or less summed up how i feel

i am the inner child..... quiet, sensitive, and shy

nellie

04-02-2002, 12:58 PM

i have another poem:

I feel empty
I have nothing good to contribute
I am unloveable
I am flawed
I am innocent
I can't smell the roses
I can not feel
I am empty...

Earth2RON

04-02-2002, 01:04 PM

i think that i'm an ugly duckling now we all know how this story ends.the ugly duckling turns into a beautiful swan:) cheer up nellie dont let anyone tell you what your heart does not feel it isnt. 

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