I just finsished my 100 page story.. and I should retitle it PLANET DAVID TO 100 pages of crap!!

[CYYYFYYY]

I finished a story I was
writing it is 100 pages. I
began editing it. I am now
thinking of retitling it from
PLANET DAVID to 100 pages of
crap because it is just
horrible. I wish I did drugs
so I can blame the drugs for
this piece of cra


Everyone Loves CYYYFYYY
I am just a Simple jewish Boy
from the Lower east Side
I am the CYYYFYYY
Party Harty!!!!!!

[PanterA]

it cant be that bad...when can we read it?

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[HordeKing1]

Although I haven't yet read the manuscript I can tell you that it needs more sex scenes, and at least one 50 foot tall robot with laser beam eyes. A zombie monkey from dimension X wouldn't hurt either. Oh yeah, and car chases, lots of car chases. And explosions. That would be cool.

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[TheGameHHH]

I agree, the sex scenes are severly lacking.

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[TheMojoPin]

Throw in pirate monkeys. Instant literary GOLD.

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[DarkHippie]

how bout a lil synopsis, Davey?


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[Doogie]

I am developing a script called "Earth vs. Soup" and "Peter Graves at the University of Minnesota"

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[JustJon]

What about the gratuitous nudity?

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[Contra]

i say you put about 50 pages of pictures in the middle.

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[canofsoup15]

"Earth vs. Soup"


YOUR GOIN DOWN EARTH!!!

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[CYYYFYYY]

This 100 pages of crap is
about NOTHING! It is 100
pages of free writing and it
stinks! Stinks I tell
ya!!!!!!!


Everyone Loves CYYYFYYY
I am just a Simple jewish Boy
from the Lower east Side
I am the CYYYFYYY
Party Harty!!!!!!

[Zipgun]

That didn't stop Hunter S. Thompson.

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