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CYYYFYYY
10-27-2002, 03:40 PM
I am writing a short story and
I can't believe I can't think
of anything so finish this
sentence.. I NEED HELP.....
The fans were cheering
like.......
So far I have thunder but I
just got to do better than
that.....
Everyone Loves CYYYFYYY
I am just a Simple jewish Boy
from the Lower east Side
I am the CYYYFYYY
Party Harty!!!!!!
GirLieBatchXoX
10-27-2002, 03:47 PM
What if you change the sentence fragment...
'The fans were ___________ly cheering.'
- thunderously
- passionately
- supportively
- enthusiastically
- relentlessly
It would also help if you posted the sentence before that one.
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TheMojoPin
10-27-2002, 03:53 PM
I thought they were saying "BOOOOOO-URNS!"
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Green Lantern
10-27-2002, 03:55 PM
THe fans were cheering like..... Jim Norton groupies
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DarkHippie
10-27-2002, 04:37 PM
the fans were roaring like prideful lions
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sleepyeyed_Jynx
10-27-2002, 04:41 PM
the fans were cheering like "cheery cheerisons"...i dunno
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FMJeff
10-27-2002, 09:30 PM
You should re-write the sentence. Fans cheer like fans. Try something like, "the sound the fans were making sounded like..."
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ChrisTheCop
10-27-2002, 09:34 PM
The night was moist
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irishkb
10-28-2002, 05:33 AM
The fans were cheering like drunken maniacs..
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Alice S. Fuzzybutt
10-28-2002, 05:50 AM
I thought they were saying "BOOOOOO-URNS!"
I was saying "Booo-urns."
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Michael Fury
10-28-2002, 06:05 AM
"the fans were cheering wildly" always works.
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irishkb
10-28-2002, 06:25 AM
the fans were cheering like the irish after they killed FSU..... hahaha
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HordeKing1
10-28-2002, 10:52 AM
It was a dark and stormy night...
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FelixDasGato
10-28-2002, 11:03 AM
The fans were cheering
like.......a pig caught in a fence.
This is kinda like Mad-Libs.
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CYYYFYYY
10-28-2002, 02:24 PM
Feel free to reword the
sentence if that helps... Do
far I am going with hippie and
his prideful Lions........
Everyone Loves CYYYFYYY
I am just a Simple jewish Boy
from the Lower east Side
I am the CYYYFYYY
Party Harty!!!!!!
Coach
10-28-2002, 02:30 PM
the fans were roaring like the din of waves hitting the strand in a winter's storm
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DarkHippie
10-28-2002, 02:46 PM
It was a dark and stormy night...
i think Snoopy beat you to that one :)
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