ok ill tell you what's wrong with the editing:
1) The pacing in the bachelor party scene. It got WAY too slow...all of a sudden there was a lull and you were like...what's going on here...it was tangible and extremely distracting.
2) There were 30-60 second scenes thrown in for what I believe to be dramatic development that had no fucking point to the entire storyline....specifically one brief exchange between father and son outside the hotel before the wedding.
3) The order of the scenes did not flow naturally. It could have been arranged a little better, I think.
Some other plot points:
1) I don't care how fucking retarded you are, an 80 yr old woman FEELS like an 80 yr old woman...if you're in the dark and you cant tell the difference you're a fucking idiot. Besides, don't you find it a little odd your partner says nothing, or even worse, is in a WHEEL CHAIR?
2) An entire wedding's worth of flowers must be ordered WAY in advance. If all the displays of flowers were destroyed and had to be replaced, it would take at least as long as it took to order them. Ridiculous.
3) Forcing the joke is getting extremely annoying, and the American Pie series is a fucking master at it. Note the scene with the dogshit/chocolate truffle and the dog humping incident.
4) The whole pubic hair through the fan thing is riduclous, if you think about it. Who would keep pastries near a fan that is so powerful it acts like a vacuum for any floating debris outside?
5) The plot is all over the place, from finding her a dress, to Jim learning how to dance, to Jim tackling with the gravity of getting married. I felt very little chemistry between Jim and Michelle because they had what I imagine to be about 10 min of screentime total. This was Stifler's movie, and everyone knows it. Once again we see another movie fall victim to the "Most Popular Character Syndrome" where the audience gravitates toward the most outrageous character and everyone else falls to the sidelines. I thought Michelle, Finch and Jim were great enough characters to focus on. Hell, the guy who fucked Tara Reid in the first film got like two lines...I don't even remember his character's NAME...what does that say to you?
6) The sudden switch to drama during the final dance scene felt extremely forced, but I liked the sentiment they were going for. If they had more of that real emotion throughout the movie I think it would have been more enjoyable. Imagine a movie about a wedding who's main focus is not on the people getting married! MORE JIM AND MICHELLE SCREENTIME!!!!!
7) The dialogue between Jim and Michelle's parents were nothing short of pointless and awfully redundant...not to mention unbelievable.
I can go on and on...it did make me laugh though...then again so do farts and fat people getting hit by cars.
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It made my heart sing.