Check These Out

[BlackFan]

Critiques greatly appreciated

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Something my friend and i are working on need un-bias criticism. family and friends can't give that.thank you all.

[FezsAssistant]

Cool!

Only thing...At the very top, I'd put 'New Orleans' all in one line if possible unless there's another reason not to.

[disneyspy]

next time you should post these in the comic book section. those guys that arent busy tryin to recruit giants might give you a better critique. it stinks and i dont like it

[Farmer Dave]

I know nothing of what you are doing so take that into account. The pointy eared broad seem a bit wordy, though she does have nice tits.

[hammersavage]

People with two different colored eyes should be drowned

[mikeyboy]

People with two different colored eyes should be drowned

David Bowie says "fuck off!".

[cougarjake13]

yeh i was going to ask if the diff color eyes were on purpose



artwork looks great


even with limited knowledge of what the story is about i think i kinda got what it is

[cougarjake13]

i think just having NEW ORLEANS, LA would work fine

or keep it all on one line

[BlackFan]

thank u people. :smile: and yeah the two different color eyes are on purpose.

[Kublakhan61]

Right on, brother! I'm happy you've been able to get this far. I've attempted this a few times myself - its tough work. Keep on it.

All the best - its looking good.

[CHUCKWAGONCOOK]

That's really great brother. The art work-the story line-the colors. If there was anything....maybe the fourth frame got a little confusing as to which bubble to read in which order. But other than that.

SWEEET!!!!

[jessicaduh]

any thread titled "check these out" that doesn't contain nudity is kind of a rip-off.

[AngelAmy]

i want more!!